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Post by Mikepoet on Apr 30, 2004 13:24:41 GMT -5
Rhymes often hold the essence.
of splendorous pains agonized joy.
Tear smudged inks the heart of a poet
Epiphanic thoughts in love letters envoy.
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Hunter
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Post by Hunter on May 2, 2004 3:33:01 GMT -5
I love this.
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Post by Mikepoet on May 3, 2004 17:13:03 GMT -5
Thank you again. I wrote this after someone somewhere had mentioned it was hard to describe love or something like that. To me, love is best described in poetry.
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Post by SilverEyes on May 18, 2004 21:48:41 GMT -5
The third line is a little confusing but the other lines are perfect.
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Post by Mikepoet on May 29, 2004 14:35:26 GMT -5
Thank you. What I meant was..well..I often cry when I write..it smudges the words and is from my heart..I figure many poets do this.. :)I hope that made sense.. ;D
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