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Post by bloodredtears on Apr 29, 2004 8:09:14 GMT -5
mmm...beautiful piece..and something that i have felt upon occasion..but i don't know if i could always be alone...great job!
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Apr 29, 2004 21:40:59 GMT -5
th,
i really like this one. it's great!
x rinna x
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Post by SilverEyes on May 18, 2004 21:34:52 GMT -5
I can appreciate this write. Especially, since I'm going through this right now with someone. Anyway, I like the imagery and the contrasts in beginning and end. the beginning is the dessert and the end an ocean. Me much like. ;D
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Post by Mikepoet on Jun 5, 2004 17:33:50 GMT -5
Beware the eyes Hawkette.. ;DA good place to drown if you ask me..
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Eclipse
Apprentice
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Post by Eclipse on Jun 8, 2004 23:45:47 GMT -5
wow...deep. i like it.
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Post by _black phoenix_ on Jul 19, 2004 13:21:52 GMT -5
A very effective piece of writing, Hawk. Your message comes through strongly.
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