Horn
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Give me wings; I want to fly with someone by my side, wherever the wind takes us
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Trapped
Apr 27, 2004 5:50:19 GMT -5
Post by Horn on Apr 27, 2004 5:50:19 GMT -5
Trapped
The house is afire,
I can’t find a way out,
No one is coming,
I am crying for help,
But no one listens,
I don’t have much more time…
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Trapped
Apr 28, 2004 0:06:44 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on Apr 28, 2004 0:06:44 GMT -5
sweet...it evokes a lot of different emotions...fear, panic...and anger too...also very visual..a house on fire is pretty descriptive...great job! i also like how this can mean something besides the house burning down...like how you can feel trapped inside your own life and weighted down by your responsibilities...anyway...enough of that...great job!
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Horn
Novice
Give me wings; I want to fly with someone by my side, wherever the wind takes us
Posts: 66
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Trapped
Apr 28, 2004 11:21:48 GMT -5
Post by Horn on Apr 28, 2004 11:21:48 GMT -5
thx alot, and you are right that it symbolizes something else too. What the reader thinks it symbolizes is just as important as the author's intention because it involves their individual experiences and backrounds in life.
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Trapped
May 12, 2004 14:30:11 GMT -5
Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on May 12, 2004 14:30:11 GMT -5
Very good piece Horn
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