NeverMore
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Beethoven Looking f*g
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Post by NeverMore on Apr 27, 2004 3:50:14 GMT -5
I am sorry that
I scare you
that feelings are so strong
as to bring fear
That some things
will overwhelm us
with time and it's troubles
that come our way
though I am far from sorry
that I love you this deep
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Hunter
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Fallen Angel
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Post by Hunter on Apr 27, 2004 6:00:53 GMT -5
Oh, very good.
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Post by bloodredtears on Apr 28, 2004 0:07:54 GMT -5
very interesting piece...i was very pleasantly surprised by where you took this poem in the end...i love the last two lines!
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Post by SilverEyes on May 18, 2004 21:27:52 GMT -5
It's a little awkward but I like the message and the final two lines.
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NeverMore
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Beethoven Looking f*g
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Post by NeverMore on May 19, 2004 2:30:11 GMT -5
for me, sorry, is an akward word to say, I doubt I ever say it well...
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