NeverMore
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Post by NeverMore on Apr 25, 2004 11:45:53 GMT -5
tell me a story
of happy ever after
show me a picture
of life in my dreams
let me in on the secret
of what makes forever
something worth having
now when I can see
what is truely possible in life
now when I feel
something filling spaces
a wish made on a star
a house made out of brick
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Post by bloodredtears on Apr 25, 2004 22:37:31 GMT -5
very intersting piece..i like that happy ever after take of a brick house....  good job! |
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Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 26, 2004 15:36:09 GMT -5
Ok, I admit it...I was confused. I'm not sure I understand the relativity of it all. Sorry, TJ
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NeverMore
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Post by NeverMore on Apr 26, 2004 16:18:59 GMT -5
first off, keep in mind that each of us reads something different into each work. No two people think alike. To break this poem down in to what I was searching for at the moment of insiration, I was a person seeking a story of happy ever after.. or a love solid enough to handle life. A picture perfect life built on a solid ground. that is the very short form of how it all relates. Though, I would hope, each reader interpets it differently within themselves *S* Thank you for the comments *S*
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Post by SilverEyes on May 18, 2004 21:12:19 GMT -5
Interesting write. I like how you portrayed the different visions that people have after reading the same story.
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good job!
