Hunter
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Apr 22, 2004 14:09:25 GMT -5
Post by Hunter on Apr 22, 2004 14:09:25 GMT -5
Regret
I fear the day
the passion leaves
what will be left
but our regret for
days gone by
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Apr 25, 2004 22:33:19 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on Apr 25, 2004 22:33:19 GMT -5
wonderful piece of poetry...this is the truth too...bittersweet...good job!
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Hunter
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Apr 25, 2004 23:50:56 GMT -5
Post by Hunter on Apr 25, 2004 23:50:56 GMT -5
Thank you.
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Apr 26, 2004 15:24:11 GMT -5
Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 26, 2004 15:24:11 GMT -5
I agree. This piece said a lot to be so short. It meant a great deal to me seeing as how I have had many love troubles in the past. This piece could actually be translated in many ways. Great job, Tj
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Hunter
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Apr 26, 2004 19:44:30 GMT -5
Post by Hunter on Apr 26, 2004 19:44:30 GMT -5
Thanks.
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May 3, 2004 17:20:27 GMT -5
Post by Mikepoet on May 3, 2004 17:20:27 GMT -5
I do not think the passion has ever left me in any relationship I was in. If there is nothing else I am passionate about her I still will desire her physical love.
I think I am as addicted to those moments of caress as any male I have ever spoken with.
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May 4, 2004 1:34:50 GMT -5
Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 4, 2004 1:34:50 GMT -5
th,
nice one, to the point. honest and bittersweet for sure.
x rinna x
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May 4, 2004 2:08:31 GMT -5
Post by Hunter on May 4, 2004 2:08:31 GMT -5
Thank you both.
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May 18, 2004 21:53:30 GMT -5
Post by SilverEyes on May 18, 2004 21:53:30 GMT -5
Sadly, I can relate to this. When there was passion, it was like a flaming torch but now it's nothing more than ash.
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