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Post by BlackRainbow on Apr 19, 2004 12:56:30 GMT -5
[glow=white,2,300]Amiss the ship
The sail is risen
Through the waves we rip
A floating prison[/glow]
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Post by John Barnett on Apr 19, 2004 13:49:48 GMT -5
Interesting write, it developed it's own meaning for me, but I have a feeling it could do that for most anyone, nice job!
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Post by SilverEyes on Apr 19, 2004 22:10:04 GMT -5
Nice write and emersing imagery. It definitely does mean something different to everyone. Welcome to Poet Club.
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Post by bloodredtears on Apr 20, 2004 0:30:52 GMT -5
wonderful piece...  i liked how almost open-ended it was for the possibilities of meaning...great job! |
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Post by Hunter on Apr 29, 2004 7:08:06 GMT -5
I love the image.
This took on its own meaning for me, as well.
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Post by Mikepoet on Apr 30, 2004 15:24:44 GMT -5
I got slavey transported by ship in the 18 hundreds.
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i liked how almost open-ended it was for the possibilities of meaning...great job!