NeverMore
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Post by NeverMore on Apr 16, 2004 16:08:05 GMT -5
written...a long time ago
A light shines on an abandoned street, Lighting up half the street, The other half remain dark, Much like man, The light being good, The dark being evil, Both struggling to cover it all, Like the light, Trying to light up the whole street, But the dark has a firm hold, Light unconquerable, Dark unconquerable, The never ending struggle between, Good and evil continues
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Post by SilverEyes on Apr 17, 2004 1:54:46 GMT -5
This reminds me of something I wrote awhile back, but anyway I like the imagery you used to compare man's struggle with dark and light with.
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Post by bloodredtears on Apr 17, 2004 19:57:16 GMT -5
wow...i love this piece the idea is wonderful and so is the comparison of men to street lights...great job..the struggle is proven wonderfullly!
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Post by John Barnett on Apr 19, 2004 18:47:40 GMT -5
I love this Joe, this is really good. I love the comparison and the imagery involved, well done.
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Hunter
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Post by Hunter on Apr 29, 2004 7:04:17 GMT -5
Very good.
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