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Post by hantigger on Apr 16, 2004 3:23:28 GMT -5
The Elephants Parting
Skulls lie in bare earth
bones we cannot leave behind
fractured by cruel hands.
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Post by John Barnett on Apr 16, 2004 13:58:42 GMT -5
Interesting write, nice imagery, well job.
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Post by SilverEyes on Apr 17, 2004 1:49:07 GMT -5
I like the imagery and the simple flow. Hmm, at some deep, natural level this piece is very appealing. Welcome to Poet Club.
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Post by hantigger on Apr 17, 2004 5:39:06 GMT -5
Thank you for your comments!
Hannah.
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Hunter
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Post by Hunter on Apr 22, 2004 0:33:17 GMT -5
I like it.
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Post by hantigger on Apr 22, 2004 3:55:11 GMT -5
Thanks!
Hannah.
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Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 26, 2004 15:26:08 GMT -5
This one actually sent a chill up my spine. It's chilling nature made it spectacular. Great job, TJ
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Post by hantigger on Apr 26, 2004 15:41:56 GMT -5
Thanks, nice to hear what people think!
Hannah.
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