NeverMore
Virtuoso
Beethoven Looking f*g
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Apr 15, 2004 0:40:22 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on Apr 15, 2004 0:40:22 GMT -5
to have the power in my hands
to take confusion from your heart
to free the things you want to feel
live the life you wish to live
so many challenges step in our lives
so many choices set in our way
If a wish were granted to me this day
your confusion would be a memory
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Apr 16, 2004 14:46:35 GMT -5
Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 16, 2004 14:46:35 GMT -5
Very interesting, and well written
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Apr 17, 2004 1:51:31 GMT -5
Post by SilverEyes on Apr 17, 2004 1:51:31 GMT -5
I really like this and I think it's because of the simple language you used to convey such a personal message.
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Apr 17, 2004 19:56:01 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on Apr 17, 2004 19:56:01 GMT -5
i love this...and simplicity is one of the best ways to convey thoughts so that everyone understands, which is why this is so wonderful...great job!
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