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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 1, 2004 14:51:13 GMT -5
I can melt inside your hand
And melt again inside your mouth
And I'm better than candy
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Post by bloodredtears on Apr 1, 2004 17:05:23 GMT -5
very interesting piece...M&M's are great! good job!
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Post by SilverEyes on Apr 1, 2004 17:55:39 GMT -5
Do I catch a double entendre there? :wink wink:  Anyway, nice write. I like the last line. |
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Post by John Barnett on Apr 1, 2004 19:43:53 GMT -5
This was very sweet, no pun intended, nice job Kelz. This is a very sensual, romantic piece.
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 1, 2004 19:48:49 GMT -5
Thanks guys for the replies, that rhymed. lol
Kelz
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Anyway, nice write. I like the last line.