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Zephyr
Apr 6, 2004 18:29:35 GMT -5
Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 6, 2004 18:29:35 GMT -5
My soul is a bird
Flying freely through the air
Chasing something more
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Zephyr
Apr 7, 2004 2:37:08 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on Apr 7, 2004 2:37:08 GMT -5
i really like how, free, this piece is...i love freedom, the feeling of supreme independence...great job!
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Zephyr
Apr 12, 2004 11:34:44 GMT -5
Post by John Barnett on Apr 12, 2004 11:34:44 GMT -5
This piece does describe freedom very well, good job Kelz
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Zephyr
Apr 12, 2004 12:03:38 GMT -5
Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 12, 2004 12:03:38 GMT -5
Kelly, I enjoyed this piece very much. It truly did describe independence, even in it's short nature. Who knew that only three lines could tell a story? Good Job,
TJ
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Zephyr
Apr 12, 2004 14:32:40 GMT -5
Post by John Barnett on Apr 12, 2004 14:32:40 GMT -5
I agree, that's one of the reasons I love haikus and poems like these because you can say so much in so little words.
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Zephyr
Apr 13, 2004 17:59:50 GMT -5
Post by SilverEyes on Apr 13, 2004 17:59:50 GMT -5
Wonderful write. I like the flow and the image of a soul on a quest.
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Zephyr
Apr 27, 2004 5:59:28 GMT -5
Post by Hunter on Apr 27, 2004 5:59:28 GMT -5
Well written.
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