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Post by John Barnett on Apr 13, 2004 18:58:09 GMT -5
He sat quietly, not making a single sound, afraid to move a muscle, thinking he might be noticed.
His gasps for breath increase, his heart pounding like a bass drum, not making eye contact with anyone. Anxiety has won yet another battle, as he succumbs to the silence.
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 14, 2004 18:38:18 GMT -5
WOW, I love the imagery and the wording of this. I almost felt like I was sitting next to this person, fantastic! I loved it John!
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Post by SilverEyes on Apr 15, 2004 0:31:10 GMT -5
Intriguing write. I like the descriptions and I almost feel like that sometimes. Sometimes...but never that intense.
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Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Apr 15, 2004 14:56:30 GMT -5
This was powerful and very well depicted
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Post by Urban Cowgirl on Apr 21, 2004 15:55:41 GMT -5
Awesome John!
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Post by bloodredtears on Apr 22, 2004 0:22:35 GMT -5
wow...wonderful piece...i really liked that one alot! i've never actually had a feeling like that, but i'm sure it would not be fun!
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Post by Mikepoet on May 1, 2004 9:23:44 GMT -5
Good descriptions. I have been there.
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