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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 6, 2004 18:28:41 GMT -5
You touch my lips
May they embrace with yours
Such a sweet union
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Post by bloodredtears on Apr 7, 2004 2:36:27 GMT -5
loved it...short and sweet...  wonderful! |
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Post by SilverEyes on Apr 13, 2004 17:23:30 GMT -5
Nice write and insight into the moment.
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Hunter
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Post by Hunter on Apr 20, 2004 17:40:11 GMT -5
mm...
Wonderful.
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Post by Urban Cowgirl on Apr 21, 2004 15:55:22 GMT -5
Great piece Kelz
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 21, 2004 16:07:17 GMT -5
Thanx
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Post by Mikepoet on May 1, 2004 9:19:48 GMT -5
Good way of describing a kiss.
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amberputis
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Post by amberputis on May 7, 2004 22:04:37 GMT -5
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wonderful!
...........aww i wanna kiss, hehe cool poem, nice expression! 