Seth
Virtuoso
Root Beer Float
Play something country!
Posts: 411
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Melt
Mar 22, 2004 16:08:42 GMT -5
Post by Seth on Mar 22, 2004 16:08:42 GMT -5
Breathe in winter's air
And mourn the people you've killed,
As you melt like snow [/color] |
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Melt
Mar 23, 2004 17:34:42 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on Mar 23, 2004 17:34:42 GMT -5
hmmm...very interesting piece..i don't know quite what to make of it...i like the imagery and i can feel the sharp bite of the winter's icy air...great job!
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Melt
Mar 26, 2004 20:22:51 GMT -5
Post by DarkEagle on Mar 26, 2004 20:22:51 GMT -5
I agree with Madame Bloodredtears above. It was a great poem and i could see what was happening very well.
Eagle
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Melt
Mar 31, 2004 20:37:24 GMT -5
Post by SilverEyes on Mar 31, 2004 20:37:24 GMT -5
Maybe it's just today's french class talking but this poem reminds me of Napolean's defeat by Russia. Anyway, I like the imagery and how the first and final lines seem to contrast winter and spring.
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Melt
Apr 1, 2004 14:21:19 GMT -5
Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Apr 1, 2004 14:21:19 GMT -5
Good job, keep it up Seth.
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Hunter
Virtuoso
Fallen Angel
Posts: 287
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Melt
Apr 20, 2004 17:39:03 GMT -5
Post by Hunter on Apr 20, 2004 17:39:03 GMT -5
Oh, I like it.
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