Wolf
Apprentice
In the end, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends.
Posts: 124
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Waves
Feb 21, 2004 0:31:01 GMT -5
Post by Wolf on Feb 21, 2004 0:31:01 GMT -5
Waves
A line of footprints, bare, small,
wanders to the sea;
erased at the edge;
as life, numbed by the sea of eternity--
Erased,
but--
claimed.
© T. GhostWolf Davidson, November 23, 1972
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amberputis
Virtuoso
~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
Posts: 330
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Waves
Feb 21, 2004 1:14:04 GMT -5
Post by amberputis on Feb 21, 2004 1:14:04 GMT -5
so simple, so subtle, yet images and feelings come directly to mind, fantastic
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Waves
Feb 21, 2004 4:09:02 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on Feb 21, 2004 4:09:02 GMT -5
i love this..very short and to the point..wonderful imagery! great job!
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Waves
Feb 21, 2004 23:26:52 GMT -5
Post by SilverEyes on Feb 21, 2004 23:26:52 GMT -5
A simplistic write but one of the more beautiful pieces I've read lately.
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Waves
Feb 24, 2004 14:43:07 GMT -5
Post by John Barnett on Feb 24, 2004 14:43:07 GMT -5
Great write.
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