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Eclipse Apprentice It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time. Posts: 222	Untitled Feb 12, 2004 20:32:42 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Eclipse on Feb 12, 2004 20:32:42 GMT -5 The face You fell in love with, Isn't what's behind the mask.
	You saw what you get If you take what you take. Look in the eyes of the test. It's all because... Now there's a feeling I get. When I look to the left. But we can never be sensed. Our searching for a sign.

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	Untitled Feb 12, 2004 20:35:50 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Feb 12, 2004 20:35:50 GMT -5 awesome piece here eclipse...i really enjoyed it...it reminded me of how bad i want to see "Count of Monte Cristo" again! great job!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	Untitled Feb 13, 2004 1:44:51 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Feb 13, 2004 1:44:51 GMT -5 Great piece and depending on interpretation could either be very true or just sad.
	You know I'm dying to live Until I'm ready I'm ready to die ~Jonny Lang~

leash Guest	Untitled Feb 13, 2004 14:43:13 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by leash on Feb 13, 2004 14:43:13 GMT -5 excellent work, eclipse. it is painful how many people will not show their real selves, but only a fake shadow of what they really are. well done as usual.

Deleted Deleted Member Posts: 0	Untitled Feb 15, 2004 15:16:37 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Deleted on Feb 15, 2004 15:16:37 GMT -5 Startingly true. Luffed it.

amberputis Virtuoso ~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~ Posts: 330	Untitled Feb 16, 2004 14:09:57 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by amberputis on Feb 16, 2004 14:09:57 GMT -5 THANK GOD...finally a sense of realization! Physical appearance is an outer shell which holds basically nothing of who a person really is. great use of your own independent mind!
	Amber

Eclipse Apprentice It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time. Posts: 222	Untitled Feb 16, 2004 19:48:14 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Eclipse on Feb 16, 2004 19:48:14 GMT -5 thank you for the kind words
	You saw what you get If you take what you take. Look in the eyes of the test. It's all because... Now there's a feeling I get. When I look to the left. But we can never be sensed. Our searching for a sign.

richie Virtuoso Posts: 302	Untitled Feb 19, 2004 7:18:47 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by richie on Feb 19, 2004 7:18:47 GMT -5 I agree with amberputis, fine work. regards Richie.
	from childhood's hour I have not been as others were-I have not seen as others saw-I could not bring my passions from a common spring from the same sourse I have not taken my sorrow: I could not awaken my heart to joy at the same tone and all I loved I loved alone.