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Post by John Barnett on Feb 12, 2004 17:30:19 GMT -5
Such an awesome prize
But is it worth the price?
Do I even care?
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 12, 2004 18:03:45 GMT -5
good piece here john..i really like how it poses the question of whether or not something that we treasure is really worth it
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 13, 2004 1:37:52 GMT -5
To me, your poem is about the risk we take everyday. Nice write.
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amberputis
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Post by amberputis on Feb 16, 2004 14:05:29 GMT -5
This really caught my attention, i read it over and over and still all the same, loved it.
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Post by John Barnett on Feb 17, 2004 20:25:11 GMT -5
Thank you. I wrote this piece about the choices we must make in life and how we can always see the "prize", so to speak, but we don't always look at the consequences we must face in order to take the "prize".
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Post by richie on Feb 18, 2004 14:34:24 GMT -5
intresting poem John, just the type for this forum, the gift, the cost,was it worth it? we can all relate to this in our lives
well done.
Richie.
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Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 23, 2004 16:41:27 GMT -5
Excellent message,and write! ;DJoe
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