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Feb 12, 2004 16:22:46 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Feb 12, 2004 16:22:46 GMT -5
So long it stood tall:
the tree, now old and weary,
rots in the snowfall.
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[AN] Aha. I did this a year ago, in sveenth grade, for a school assignment. Hee.
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Feb 12, 2004 16:30:26 GMT -5
Post by leash on Feb 12, 2004 16:30:26 GMT -5
you captured the moment perfectly. beautiful work.
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Feb 12, 2004 17:09:18 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on Feb 12, 2004 17:09:18 GMT -5
very good piece...to me it symbolizes that everything eventually dies and rots...quite gruesome, but thats what i get out of it...good job!
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Feb 13, 2004 1:36:11 GMT -5
Post by SilverEyes on Feb 13, 2004 1:36:11 GMT -5
Wow, the flow and wording of that piece was incredible.
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amberputis
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Feb 16, 2004 14:16:20 GMT -5
Post by amberputis on Feb 16, 2004 14:16:20 GMT -5
it just reminds me how much i hate winter, heh.
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imaginary goddess #5
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Feb 17, 2004 20:22:40 GMT -5
Post by imaginary goddess #5 on Feb 17, 2004 20:22:40 GMT -5
yes, it does seem to have a hidden meaning - about everything that eventually dies. wonderful job capturing the moment in such few words.
- Lianna
PS: "it just reminds me how much i hate winter, heh. "
- hahaha. ;D Yea, i know what you mean.
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Feb 18, 2004 14:36:47 GMT -5
Post by richie on Feb 18, 2004 14:36:47 GMT -5
excellent poem, almost hypnotic.
regards Richie.
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