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Post by John Barnett on Feb 5, 2004 16:15:25 GMT -5
I used to travel a dead-end road
Searching for something no longer there
Trying to revive what was already gone
On an empty heart that could go nowhere
Now I travel on the main road again
I finally found what I was in search of
It was in my passenger's seat all along
Now my heart is full again
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Post by serenepoetress on Feb 5, 2004 17:58:52 GMT -5
Sometimes we overlook the things that are right infront of us... a very truthful piece that expresses that perfectly!
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 5, 2004 19:59:26 GMT -5
i very much enjoyed this piece john...it's quite true that the things the we take for granted in this life are actually the things that we love the most
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Chaotic_Thetis
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Bleed me! For i have witnessed yet remained silent.Slay me! For i had your love and kept it.
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Post by Chaotic_Thetis on Feb 6, 2004 15:17:24 GMT -5
Indeed, i remember GhostWolf explaining in so many words how we sometimes have trouble seeing what's right in front of us because we're too concerned with looking too far ahead. This i thought captured that, wonderful piece ^_^
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 6, 2004 22:42:09 GMT -5
Great piece, John. The second stanza just made me smile. ;D
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amberputis
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~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
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Post by amberputis on Feb 16, 2004 14:21:22 GMT -5
This was great, awesome write
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