Used to Remember

Tania
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Used to Remember Jan 26, 2004 6:24:00 GMT -5

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Post by Tania on Jan 26, 2004 6:24:00 GMT -5

Used to remember the
Scent of you
While walking down the street
In another place and time
And the anger and the passion
That has burnt to ashes now
And trying to memorise
Whey it was so hard
To break up, break down
And the sky is bluer today
As memory grows hazy
And life goes on
And it does not matter anymore
That I cannot remember you.-Tania Walsh-

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	Used to Remember Jan 26, 2004 16:41:41 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Jan 26, 2004 16:41:41 GMT -5 Beautiful write and all to true.
	You know I'm dying to live Until I'm ready I'm ready to die ~Jonny Lang~

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	Used to Remember Jan 26, 2004 16:44:25 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Jan 26, 2004 16:44:25 GMT -5 very good piece..short and to the point!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

richie Virtuoso Posts: 302	Used to Remember Feb 3, 2004 15:14:43 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by richie on Feb 3, 2004 15:14:43 GMT -5 I find this sad and a good poem with a fine flow. richie.
	from childhood's hour I have not been as others were-I have not seen as others saw-I could not bring my passions from a common spring from the same sourse I have not taken my sorrow: I could not awaken my heart to joy at the same tone and all I loved I loved alone.

sweetest17sin Virtuoso don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile! Posts: 252	Used to Remember Feb 15, 2004 20:35:10 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 15, 2004 20:35:10 GMT -5 kudos to you. this poem was awesome. way to let go...way to not care!
	somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile and finds in your presence that life is worthwhile, so when you are lonely remember it's true; somebody, somewhere is thinking of you!

amberputis Virtuoso ~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~ Posts: 330	Used to Remember Feb 16, 2004 13:53:25 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by amberputis on Feb 16, 2004 13:53:25 GMT -5 such a divine poem!
	Amber

JosephScottMorris Apprentice Posts: 157	Used to Remember Feb 23, 2004 2:18:43 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 23, 2004 2:18:43 GMT -5 Excellent poem,Thanks for sharing it! ;DJoe

Post by Tania on Jan 26, 2004 6:24:00 GMT -5

Post by SilverEyes on Jan 26, 2004 16:41:41 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Jan 26, 2004 16:44:25 GMT -5

Post by richie on Feb 3, 2004 15:14:43 GMT -5

Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 15, 2004 20:35:10 GMT -5

Post by amberputis on Feb 16, 2004 13:53:25 GMT -5

Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 23, 2004 2:18:43 GMT -5