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Post by John Barnett on Feb 5, 2004 14:37:10 GMT -5
The itch will not stop
I have to give in to this
The tempest has won
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Post by richie on Feb 5, 2004 14:42:58 GMT -5
Again excellent structure intriguing.
regards richie.
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Chaotic_Thetis
Apprentice
Bleed me! For i have witnessed yet remained silent.Slay me! For i had your love and kept it.
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Post by Chaotic_Thetis on Feb 6, 2004 15:13:19 GMT -5
Just short and creative enough to evoke a sense of curiosity in the reader, i very much liked this.
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 6, 2004 17:50:44 GMT -5
I love this piece and it's definitely very intriguing.
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amberputis
Virtuoso
~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
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Post by amberputis on Feb 16, 2004 14:24:06 GMT -5
It's kind of disappointing in a way, giving in, but i very much enjoyed this, nice job
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imaginary goddess #5
Novice
shape me into something I never will be, and you'll find out this facade was an escape from reality.
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Post by imaginary goddess #5 on Feb 17, 2004 20:18:51 GMT -5
hmm, interesting. It leaves the reader to interpret what you mean, however I think its good.  - Lianna Imaginary Goddess |
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Post by richie on Feb 19, 2004 7:24:26 GMT -5
I liked this so much, very clever
regards Richie.
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