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Post by Sathien on Mar 10, 2004 12:09:52 GMT -5
Wind on Drought
heightened sensations
crisp invisible touches
moaning sand and dirt
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Post by John Barnett on Mar 11, 2004 15:45:54 GMT -5
Great imagery, good job!
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Post by bloodredtears on Mar 15, 2004 16:18:26 GMT -5
i love how you personified the sand and the dirt....this was a wonderful imagery piece...great job!
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Post by SilverEyes on Mar 29, 2004 23:33:14 GMT -5
Interesting imagery, and a wonderful relation between wind and dirt. I'm reminded of human beings as well because I've been reading a lot of creation myths lately and the human beings are all mad of clay or dust; also, the "sensations" themselves remind me of human experience.
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Post by Hunter on Apr 20, 2004 17:37:46 GMT -5
Very good.
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