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Post by serenepoetress on Feb 2, 2004 23:33:13 GMT -5
Desperate prayers— unanswered.
Insufferable angst— unyielding.
Mephistopheles grasp— unrelenting.
Insidious death— unsympathetic.
Nefarious oppression— unjustified.
Insatiable hunger— unsatisfied.
Slavish existence— unsanctified.
Hell’s castigation— unconscionable.
Exquisite deliverance— unattainable.
Debaucheries disciple— unredeemable.
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 3, 2004 2:43:10 GMT -5
very interesting piece here...i like the way it's set up...very good...where did you get the inspiration for this piece?
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Post by richie on Feb 3, 2004 8:14:07 GMT -5
I like this set up too good style and layout
keep writing richie.
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Post by T.J. Barber on Feb 3, 2004 12:04:09 GMT -5
I loved it. It spoke to me in a very weird way that I have yet to explain to myself. Great job.
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 3, 2004 19:01:11 GMT -5
I like the change of format. I haven't seen one like that in a while. Anyway, it almost sounds like you're answering questions when I read it. Nice write.
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Post by John Barnett on Feb 5, 2004 16:22:31 GMT -5
This is an excellent piece, great job! Great format!
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imaginary goddess #5
Novice
shape me into something I never will be, and you'll find out this facade was an escape from reality.
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Post by imaginary goddess #5 on Feb 17, 2004 20:24:48 GMT -5
i loved your choice of words and format. true - i havent these that often either. wonderful job on this one.
- lianna
(imaginary goddess)
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