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Post by Persephone on Dec 23, 2003 8:32:26 GMT -5
I can’t see the sun, for the moon blocks my view,
I saw the clouds, even the stars, but they’re nothing new.
I searched for your soul and found myself instead.
I know you have my heart hanging by a thread.
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Post by bloodredtears on Jan 7, 2004 12:32:28 GMT -5
i really really like this...the first two lines were my favorite...i think it may have ended a little suddenly, but that's just my opinion...great job!
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Post by SilverEyes on Jan 17, 2004 2:51:36 GMT -5
Wow...this is great!
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Post by serenepoetress on Feb 2, 2004 23:23:42 GMT -5
I really enjoyed this piece...it had a whimsical aura about it...is this a specific form or just a short poetic scribe?
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Post by Persephone on Feb 3, 2004 6:48:03 GMT -5
It's just a short piece. Probably will stay that way.
Thanks for the replies!
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Post by richie on Feb 3, 2004 8:15:49 GMT -5
I like this one, well set out shows good style and thinking excellent
regards richie.
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Post by T.J. Barber on Feb 3, 2004 12:01:59 GMT -5
It was a very tasteful piece. I enjoyed reading it. It was ended very suddenly but that's alright. Everyone has there signature and there preferrence. This is just yours. Great one
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