NeverMore
Virtuoso
Beethoven Looking f*g
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May 17, 2004 14:03:16 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on May 17, 2004 14:03:16 GMT -5
This is my doorway I stand in thinking the taste of your lips still fresh in my mind you've gone back home now seems so far away I never could have known when this all began what I would be thinking now the feelings that rule my mind what began as a dream still stands on it's own could I be so lucky in life that love will stand it's ground only you have the answers now my love is written in stone though thoughts of running surround me Here I shall stand strong with my messed up words thoughts that don't write themselves I know that love is real I know that I love you
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May 17, 2004 23:54:31 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on May 17, 2004 23:54:31 GMT -5
great piece you have here joe...so beautifully loving from one vantage point, so beautifully heartbreaking from another...great job!
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Jun 5, 2004 12:02:17 GMT -5
Post by Mikepoet on Jun 5, 2004 12:02:17 GMT -5
I agree well written and inspired by love..
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Jul 6, 2004 23:51:38 GMT -5
Post by TheToker on Jul 6, 2004 23:51:38 GMT -5
awesome piece, i love that feeling after a good night. you can't stop thinking about every little detail!
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