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Post by leash on Dec 10, 2003 15:18:03 GMT -5
cinnamon love letters
fall from an empty sky.
small, pink print
lightly caresses
the lonely envelopes
into a frenzy of madness.
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thanks for reading.
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Post by Persephone on Dec 10, 2003 20:45:01 GMT -5
Succinct yet sweet. Nice job. =)
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Post by bloodredtears on Dec 11, 2003 11:44:00 GMT -5
i like this...very interesting piece...great job!
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Post by SilverEyes on Jan 17, 2004 2:56:30 GMT -5
Aww, it's cute.
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Post by richie on Feb 2, 2004 17:14:59 GMT -5
this is good work, excellent.
regards richie
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Post by leash on Feb 2, 2004 17:24:49 GMT -5
thank you all for the wonderful feedback.. it was much apprecaited.  |
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Post by NeverMore on Apr 18, 2004 13:19:49 GMT -5
short, but impressive!!
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Post by Hunter on Apr 28, 2004 23:40:58 GMT -5
Very good.
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