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leash Guest	-bleeding rainbow- Dec 9, 2003 20:17:49 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by leash on Dec 9, 2003 20:17:49 GMT -5 -bleeding rainbow- colours seep like thick pain from empty buckets. ________ thanks for reading.

Persephone Guest	-bleeding rainbow- Dec 10, 2003 20:47:26 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by Persephone on Dec 10, 2003 20:47:26 GMT -5 Is it pain or paint? Potent words nevertheless.

leash Guest	-bleeding rainbow- Dec 11, 2003 0:46:00 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by leash on Dec 11, 2003 0:46:00 GMT -5 well, when it first popped into my head it was paint.. but i decided that i liked pain more. and paint cant really leak from an empty bucket anyways.. thanks for the reply.

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	-bleeding rainbow- Dec 11, 2003 11:40:16 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Dec 11, 2003 11:40:16 GMT -5 pain was definitely the right choice...great job with this!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

John Barnett Founders Founder Posts: 994	-bleeding rainbow- Jan 6, 2004 14:20:20 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by John Barnett on Jan 6, 2004 14:20:20 GMT -5 Yes, this is a very well written piece, great job!
	Jwalaeb

leash Guest	-bleeding rainbow- Jan 6, 2004 16:13:00 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by leash on Jan 6, 2004 16:13:00 GMT -5 thank you. i appreciate the feedback.

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	-bleeding rainbow- Jan 17, 2004 2:52:56 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Jan 17, 2004 2:52:56 GMT -5 I like the imagery.
	You know I'm dying to live Until I'm ready I'm ready to die ~Jonny Lang~

serenepoetress Apprentice Posts: 84	-bleeding rainbow- Feb 2, 2004 23:26:28 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by serenepoetress on Feb 2, 2004 23:26:28 GMT -5 an exceptional piece...is it a haiku...vivid imagery in so few words is never an easy task...very well executed!
	Last Edit: Feb 2, 2004 23:27:22 GMT -5 by serenepoetress Copyright 2004 Laura Mae Oldham-Brownell

richie Virtuoso Posts: 302	-bleeding rainbow- Feb 3, 2004 8:24:01 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by richie on Feb 3, 2004 8:24:01 GMT -5 this is beautiful I love it, rich with implecation you must come from England I spell colours the same way. regards richie.
	from childhood's hour I have not been as others were-I have not seen as others saw-I could not bring my passions from a common spring from the same sourse I have not taken my sorrow: I could not awaken my heart to joy at the same tone and all I loved I loved alone.

T.J. Barber Administrator Founder I would advise you to stay on my good side!!! Posts: 937	-bleeding rainbow- Feb 3, 2004 12:00:36 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by T.J. Barber on Feb 3, 2004 12:00:36 GMT -5 This was a good piece. It was very poetic indeed. Your wording skills are still unmatched old friend.
	No man is an island in itself...Therefore, never send for whom the bell tolls. It tolls for the''

leash Guest	-bleeding rainbow- Feb 3, 2004 17:16:55 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by leash on Feb 3, 2004 17:16:55 GMT -5 you must come from England I spell colours the same way. canada, actually. go canucks!!