NeverMore
Virtuoso
Beethoven Looking f*g
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Post by NeverMore on May 13, 2004 12:10:50 GMT -5
I will love you with all my heart,
To have forever - never to part.
This is a promise engrained in me,
Take my hand and let it be.
I will go to the ends of the earth if that is what you need,
Just say yes and let your soul take the lead.
This is a promise at the core of me,
Kiss my lips and let this be.
I will wipe your tears with no questions asked,
No more will your arms be wanting.
This is a promise I make to you,
Look into my eyes and follow through.
I will know how to hold you just by the look in your eye,
I will never forget - not even on the day that I die.
This is a promise of my passion for you,
smile at me and make it true.
I will support you even when I cannot support myself anymore,
I will dig deeper and find the hidden strength at my inner core.
This promise means I sacrifice all of me for you,
Understand this- and make our lives anew.
I will love you with everything so deep inside,
And to only you - this gift I shall confide.
This is a promise so incredibly real,
kiss me my love and you shall feel
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Post by bloodredtears on May 14, 2004 16:23:44 GMT -5
wonderful piece...so hopeful....so promising....great job!
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Post by Mikepoet on Jun 20, 2004 13:37:32 GMT -5
This was a good write..
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NeverMore
Virtuoso
Beethoven Looking f*g
Posts: 454
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Post by NeverMore on Aug 12, 2004 14:47:18 GMT -5
I thank you both very much..
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deadybear
Novice
angels are all around us, jus some are easier to see then others.
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Post by deadybear on Nov 11, 2004 12:05:11 GMT -5
your poem is ace u r very talented
i hope one day i can write with such emoticion
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Wickedblades666
Apprentice
I Hate Life, but i am stuck in it by my own rules: death is for quitters, i dont quit...
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Post by Wickedblades666 on Nov 11, 2004 17:07:30 GMT -5
so passionate, so beautiful...*trys not to cry*
very good write
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Nov 16, 2004 5:29:08 GMT -5
oh, nevermore...
you break my heart. i love the light you see.
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NeverMore
Virtuoso
Beethoven Looking f*g
Posts: 454
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Post by NeverMore on Nov 16, 2004 23:39:24 GMT -5
*smiles*
Thank you so much... but I do not write them, somehow my heart takes hold of my keyboard and there they sit
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Seth
Virtuoso
Root Beer Float
Play something country!
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Post by Seth on Nov 21, 2004 17:12:12 GMT -5
Hm, as it is plainly seen, your heart writes the emotions that words alone cannot comprehend...
Emotional, powerful but most of all beautiful...
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