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Post by KG on May 7, 2004 21:49:22 GMT -5
A blank stare, covered by blonde hair. A track to the vein to increase your beauty.
But not to me... Only to the mirror...
Throw me away, you don't need pills... Cast of this facade, You never wanted to be healed... Not that I ever helped you in any way...
Seran-wrap and liquify, inhale and sterilize... Caught up in the malevolent truth of your high... Don't ever open your eyes...
Another hit for another lie, One last pill and pack up and fly...
Labeled and loved, Clique and rise...
Above and outta reach, but I always got you high... Don't ever open your eyes...
A blank stare, covered by blonde hair. A track to the vein to increase your beauty.
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Post by KG on May 7, 2004 21:50:27 GMT -5
I know that htis is a repost and that it is prolly going to make a few of you mods mad, but I thought I would give this one another shot seeing how we are all trying to get used to eachother. I'll be good this time I promise! ;D
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Post by bloodredtears on May 14, 2004 16:17:40 GMT -5
i remember this piece well...i liked it the first time and is still like it...good job KG
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Post by KG on May 16, 2004 16:42:28 GMT -5
Thanks Kris, I do appreciate your opinions.
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Eclipse
Apprentice
It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time.
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Post by Eclipse on May 16, 2004 17:57:59 GMT -5
i guess i didn't read this one before but i really liked it.
Throw me away, you don't need pills... Cast of this facade, You never wanted to be healed... Not that I ever helped you in any way...
that's my fav part. and the second and last lines. the repition was a nice touch. I loved your descriptions in this piece. it's wonderfully written. thank you for sharing.
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Post by KG on May 19, 2004 9:54:15 GMT -5
Notta problem, hope you check out my other work!
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