A fool

[NeverMore]

(this could fit in a few places, it is less scorned then seeking, alas, certainty is an old path *S*)



if only in this world
your love could see me call
if only you could tell
the future with your smile
would you see past the years
could you see through the tears
would you understand the life
has timeless boundries
would you see me in your thoughs
would you hold me in your arms
do you have the streangth
to break all the rules
can you pick out a true love
even in the driving rain
can you hold a snowflake in your hand
and let it go without melting
can you love a fool in time
that has only words left to life

[bloodredtears]

i love this piece....seems almost romantic...but you're asking...so there's a vulnerability to it that makes one wary of the answer...great job!

[Mikepoet]

This one was rather deep. These questions I've noticed you asking in a few of your poems lately, I wonder these things myself. Of course you word the wonderings well.