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My Hero
May 6, 2004 16:30:06 GMT -5
Post by KG on May 6, 2004 16:30:06 GMT -5
My hero that never does anything for me I can't help but hate you But at the same time all I do is love you Why won't you let go inside I even tried so hard to hide Bleed me dry Bleed me dry
Get back, no stop, come please Closer and push, make it all go away
Then I feel you, run deep inside my heart Saving nothing, only there to watch me fall apart My hero face down into the skin Lets seperate ourselves from our sin
I am sick and tired of your face staring at me from that blue pill I cant help but taste all your waste It doesnt get the job done anymore
My hero that never does anything for me I can't help but hate you But at the same time all I do is love you Why won't you let go inside I even tried so hard to hide Bleed me dry Bleed me dry
Get back, no stop, come please Closer and push, make it all go away
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My Hero
May 6, 2004 16:42:43 GMT -5
Post by Mikepoet on May 6, 2004 16:42:43 GMT -5
I know that hero it's presence I'm dreaming leave me alone I need you I'm screaming!
A fight to the death KG.
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My Hero
May 6, 2004 17:13:50 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on May 6, 2004 17:13:50 GMT -5
ummm...i really have no idea what you're talking about as your hero in this poem..but i love the piece itself...great job!
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My Hero
May 6, 2004 18:14:01 GMT -5
Post by John Barnett on May 6, 2004 18:14:01 GMT -5
I know what he's talking about, and this poem gives it an interesting outlook, very good Brad, I like the way you portrayed the "hero" in this piece.
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My Hero
May 7, 2004 21:33:09 GMT -5
Post by KG on May 7, 2004 21:33:09 GMT -5
I think if I named it "My Heroine" then it would make more sense!
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My Hero
May 7, 2004 21:34:23 GMT -5
Post by KG on May 7, 2004 21:34:23 GMT -5
Oh and Mike,
Yeah buddy it's ruff but drying out feels good in the long run! ;D
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Post by Mikepoet on May 8, 2004 0:05:45 GMT -5
Defferent Hero but same in the end bud..I hope to feel this good feeling you feel..
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