DarkVortex
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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words." -Robert Frost
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Post by DarkVortex on Aug 4, 2005 20:12:30 GMT -5
This world of misshapen words angers me so. That for every time I pray I have yet to woe. Just a single weep for all that I have lost. But the voices say no and I pay the finial cost.
As I hope for something new the time glides by. For every spent second the clock starts to cry. I fall rock bottom as I have lost my love, and closest friend. In due time this cold concrete shall be the pitiful end.
My life is but a wax candle upon every drip. Before they even hit the ground I begin to trip. My dreams are gone and I await for anything to come. A signal or the lovely sound of a womens hum.
I just sit quiet and listen to the tune of lies. And above everyone I watch death as it fly's. For upon every note it finds a soul. Digging into mine, burning it with the darkest coal.
Within my knocking walls and flickering halls. I open every door searching for whatever calls. As I get closer I begin to hear what the voices preach. If I sacrifice my selfless due, love is what I'll reach.
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Post by T.J. Barber on Aug 10, 2005 2:47:45 GMT -5
WOW !!!
Intense is a word that greatly describes this piece. I loved it. If only we had more active members that could post works such as this...That would be awesome.
TJ
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Post by alostandbrokensoul on Aug 29, 2005 10:20:05 GMT -5
this was wonderful, i loved it its good to read your poems again!!
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