midnight verses

[DeadByMorning]

What prompted you to say life will tear us both apart?
I'm so unemotional I could cry,
Only taking pleasure in other people's sorrows.
What the f*ck is wrong with me?
Pain doesn't work on me anymore
Neither does the music
I'm going into a downward spiral
And no one really notices.
Living like a teenage rollercoaster
And it's headin' to crash.
There's a void in my heart
Extending to the bottom
Which is cracked and stained with blood
The tears just won't come
But when they do they won't stop
I'm like a porcelain doll
The main reason you shouldn't give a doll a brain.
I want to break
Fall into your arms and never wake up
You don't even see me anymore.
The urge is far too much
I just wanted to let you know
I'm sorry if I give in
But you've driven the nails
So deeply into my heart.
There's no way I'll be able to pull them back out.
Oblivious to everything,
I just want to die
But it seems lately
The closest thing to dying
Is crying
And I'm crying
That's for sure
I wish so much but lucky stars
Just don't work in my favor.

[Seth]

I want to break
Fall into your arms and never wake up



I'm sorry if I give in
But you've driven the nails
So deeply into my heart.

Fascinating write, I like the pain and agony laced throughout this... The flow and imagery is wonderfully expressed. Fantastically written.

[T.J. Barber]

I agree Seth, this is a fascinating write. I enjoyed it greatly..

Tj