adarnase
Novice
When I fall, I fall hard.
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Post by adarnase on Mar 13, 2005 15:58:53 GMT -5
My heart is tearing apart I sacrificed love For freedom
Scared Can't stop loving her My heart is imprisoned
Can't forget her lips Thinking of the smoothness of her skin Our kisses as we joined
Can't forget her voice Reminiscing the magical moments we shared The caress of her brown eyes
Can't forget her tormented soul A beautiful angel with a heavy burden Scarred mind, body and heart
Can't forget her quest For the man of her dreams But I refused her
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Seth
Virtuoso
Root Beer Float
Play something country!
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Post by Seth on Mar 13, 2005 22:37:48 GMT -5
Ouch. Lovely piece. Refreshing and captivating and the ending is totally impacting. Awesome write, I absolutely love it.
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