Lost

[QueenofDarkness]

I stand in a meadow
Surrounded by mountains
I'm looking for a way out
The mountains too steep to climb
No room to squeeze between
The mountains overshadow me
The sun burning my skin
Glaring off the daisies
Into my eyes
Suddenly blackness closes in
I hear thunder in the distance
I scream for someone to help me
No one can hear my plea
Lightning shoots across the sky
It seems very close
Only a few feet away
Lightning bolts hit the ground
And suddenly
I see the stream of light
And it hits me
Now I hang in the abyss
Nowhere to go
No one around to help
Lost forever
Lost for eternity.

Will I ever be found?

[NeverMore]

Awsome write.. I very much enjoyed reading it

[X x K e l Z x X]

I agree with Joe, this is great Queen

[Seth]

Hmm, such an entrancing fearful despair. The detail to the imagery is stunning, the diction is awesome and pleasantly engrossing. Stellar write, this was all so great!

[chris]

great write. Very powerful words. loved it.

[kalotaable]

nice great depth

[Robin B. Lipinski]

Nice, conjures images of the hang-mans knot along with reality of being alone.