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Post by †.(V)ôô|\|£Î†ƒåcë.† on Mar 3, 2005 1:49:21 GMT -5
My suicide Is not tempting For my choice Has already been made,
My eyes are no longer glowing For I suffer from this taunting pain,
This life of mine Is no longer living I walk like a zombie Striving to die
It seems like This feeling of mine Is soon spreading Making me soon cry
And as I cry It seems as no one cares Even as I hear banging on my door My tears soon theirs As they weep, Fearing that I will soon die
And their lives soon No longer care to mine. For my death was Not Tempting
For My choice was Labeled..
.::Suicide::.
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Post by QueenofDarkness on Mar 3, 2005 15:50:30 GMT -5
Once again this was VERY nice. Your poetry reminds me so much of myself. Its actually kinda scary. Hope to hear more from you soon. Jeana
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Post by †.(V)ôô|\|£Î†ƒåcë.† on Mar 3, 2005 17:41:08 GMT -5
Thanks HeHe =)
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Mar 5, 2005 12:50:52 GMT -5
This is awesome Moonlit, keep this up
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Post by Seth on Mar 5, 2005 22:46:50 GMT -5
Thisi s very compelling and just, so well written. So easy to relate to, to feel and to get lost in, the depth of its emotion and pain is stunning and the final stanza really brings it all together. Just fantastic.
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Post by Broken hope on Mar 6, 2005 21:45:15 GMT -5
it's nice to come back and see some really good poetry.
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Post by †.(V)ôô|\|£Î†ƒåcë.† on Mar 7, 2005 9:33:01 GMT -5
Thanks every one =D
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