This Disease

[Angel Of Music]

Oh so cold
So cold without the sun
This disease spreads,
Infecting everyone

Sometimes the darkness engulfs me
Sometimes I am lost
I wish to be dead
But I fear the cost

A river of blood flows
It is made of lies and hate
While the earth dies
We wait at hell's gate...

Watching the days die
I am lost inside my mind
When the light took them all
I was left behind

Oh so cold
So cold without the sun
This disease spreads,
Infecting everyone...

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Heh this was kewlie. I loved how you ended it. *the light took everyone but me* was great too. I loved it ;o Nice poem =D

[X x K e l Z x X]

Very awesome, I like what I'm reading

[Seth]

DeadInTheShadows said:

Watching the days die
I am lost inside my mind
When the light took them all
I was left behind

This is the definition of cool. Love the intriguing imagery that comes to life here, thanks in part to the awesome wording. Very catching and gripping, just love it all...

[adarnase]

This poem touched my heart... I have felt what you are expressing a few times in my life.... I like the way you use metaphors... Beautiful...