calamityroo
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Hello again, my dear old friend, why do you leave so often now?
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Post by calamityroo on Feb 25, 2005 7:37:31 GMT -5
When I close my eyes
I see your face
So soft
So beautiful
So close to touch
As my hand
Trys to reach
FOr you
You dissappear
Fading slowly
From my view
Then it hits me
It was never you.
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Seth
Virtuoso
Root Beer Float
Play something country!
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Post by Seth on Feb 28, 2005 2:19:34 GMT -5
Reading this again, is really such a trip. I've read this like ten times by now, (I'm crazy, just go with it)
and I just like the way it ends. So evident and clear, it's something different than what you normally see, I suppose that's why I like it so much.
Has that harsh reality to it.
Fantastic write!
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calamityroo
Novice
Hello again, my dear old friend, why do you leave so often now?
Posts: 18
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Post by calamityroo on Feb 28, 2005 17:39:08 GMT -5
Thanks, yet again! I apperciate all the comments... ;D
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Mar 1, 2005 19:53:04 GMT -5
Short and great
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calamityroo
Novice
Hello again, my dear old friend, why do you leave so often now?
Posts: 18
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Post by calamityroo on Mar 1, 2005 21:11:21 GMT -5
Thank you...
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