Lost

[Angel Of Music]

Whirling, spinning
Out of control
Into the darkest pit below
Into the jaws of the Beast of Night
Into the Land of Blackened Fright

Don't stray from the path
Lest you become lost
Unless you risk
The ultimate cost
And condemn yourself to eternal doom
locked inside a darkened room
Alone forever
Without the sun
Entombed within
A realm of no one

No one to listen
When you cry out
Confessing every
Sin and doubt
No one to see you
Withering away
No one to watch you
Die today...

[Seth]

Pretty awesome piece, the fact that it's so nicely
written and has such a great flowing rhythm really brings out the emotion and grim imagery.
Fantastic write, the closing line brings it all together nicely.

[X x K e l Z x X]

Very good