Crimson Madness

[DeadByMorning]

I don't know how to feel right now.
I really don't.
I broke.
I crumbled under the pressure.
Blood seems to be everywhere,
even my tears seem stained crimson
as I sob in my silence.
Blood seems to be flowing
from every crevices,
every fibre of time that's broken
by a promise.
I cannot see anything
through the scarlet curtain
my brain has become.
All I can think about is
the broken skin,
the rash,
the crimson elixir bleeding from everywhere
as I beg for forgiveness
for my sin in breaking so many promises.
But then I think,
people break promises all the time,
so why should I cry?
Yet, I go on crying,
a fallen angel
crying blood
at her demise.

[Seth]

DeadByMorning said:

I crumbled under the pressure.
Blood seems to be everywhere,
even my tears seem stained crimson
as I sob in my silence.

I love how this reads, there's something so deeply empowering about it. I guess because it can be related to and it's a common pain and image we usually end up living and knowing. Powerful in its imagery and wording.
There's a quality of realism shown here.

Yet, I go on crying,
a fallen angel
crying blood
at her demise.

I just love this closing. Just seems to be a final end; a very fantastic way of closing the piece... Powerful write, the emotions running through this, backed up by the deep telling, is something that can be felt and known by a lot of peole, myself included. Lovely write.

[X x K e l Z x X]

So deep and dark