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Post by QueenofDarkness on Feb 22, 2005 15:25:42 GMT -5
There was a girl who never smiled Grew up in a confusing world Lived in denial Afraid to love Others didn't know What was to be feared Was only a show A bad day that would never end And she never smiled What was so bad Is that she had to play pretend What made her mad The fact she couldn't find the end She sits and wonders For a little while Why she has defide The right to smile In her mind She can see A little girl once so happy She wonders where That girl has gone She has been in reality Way too long Yet she never smiles.
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Seth
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Post by Seth on Feb 28, 2005 2:12:07 GMT -5
Love the message here and how wonderfully it was told. Beautiful yet sad undertones, fleshes out the pain and the realism quite well. Fantastic write, I think there's a lot of people that can relate to the tragic message here.
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Mar 1, 2005 19:54:39 GMT -5
Stellar write
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