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Post by Angel Of Music on Feb 6, 2005 21:57:20 GMT -5
i really don't know what this poem means...it just sort of came to me while i was listnen to music...i don't like the second part...it sounds too repetitive.
Alone I sit, In an empty chair Watching all the people; They cannot feel my stare
The air grows stagnant The mind grows numb The sun goes down The night has come
Slowly the stars fade The moon is dead Slice open my soul Watch my tears run red
Reflections glitter in the water Of secrets that should not have been told They whisper slowly to us And relate tales of old
Chimes are ringing in the distance A music box's memory Then all is silent; all is still It is now that my heart breaks free
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NeverMore
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Post by NeverMore on Feb 7, 2005 0:25:01 GMT -5
Sometimes, even if you did not believe in a higher power, we as poets seem to write things that we just have no clue of where they came from. Iknow I have experienced this on both the up scale and the down. Writing some of my best works when the mood of the work reflects something I do not feel. To me, it is a higher power working within us, for the benefit of someone else. Like I say though, that is simply my way of justifying some of what I write. I enjoyed this work. And although I see what you mean about the second part, it fits well if read as a whole. Great write.. keepit up *S*
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Feb 17, 2005 22:00:38 GMT -5
This is AWESOME
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