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Post by Gidget on Feb 4, 2005 7:08:42 GMT -5
The pain of my soul numbs me feeling of happiness and joy have faded away never to return again it seems the coldness of the dark envelops my heart chilling my blood where is the warmth that once surrounded me? my mind shudders with memories of what once was and what will never be
I search for a way out of the darkness but it seems to loom ahead of me I cry out with rage seeking a hand of help but nothing, I am alone in this darkness i cry, but no one hears my tears fall to the floor no one is there I am alone I cry alone no one to hear and no one to care
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Post by Seth on Feb 4, 2005 14:19:27 GMT -5
Sadness and loneliness are a part of life. And in that, there are a ton of poems written and inspired by it. Your words here ring true. They really reflect the feelings, the emotions of wanting but always being alone. And sometimes no matter how hard you 'search' nothing but the darkness will be found... That sort of empty depression, relates to this. This is very simple, but very evident and clear. Nicely written, it took me back to some moments in my life.
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Feb 17, 2005 22:00:58 GMT -5
So sad, yet powerful, great piece
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