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Post by Broken hope on Jan 28, 2005 17:42:50 GMT -5
This, the next and final end. Dying alone, without any friends.
Is this what you pictured in your dreams? Where nothing goes the way it should seem.
Everythings turned so ugly in this world. Everythings broken, because of a girl.
Wait, wait, is it all because of me? The answers are so clear, why can't i see?
I've become so blind over these years. Eyes cease to see from these bloody tears.
Now is this the end? Yes, i'm sorry my friends.
It seems to call me to my side. I lack the courage to try to hide.
Middle of my heart. A line drawn from the start.
Down the middle of my wrist. I couldn't be saved by one loving kiss.
No, you can't save me now. I don't want you to know how.
Don't save me anymore. Me zero and the world has scored.
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Seth
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Post by Seth on Jan 29, 2005 18:38:22 GMT -5
Very moody and grim. I loved it. The emotion and troubles are all relative to one another, so a lot of people can definitely relate in some way to the feelings expressed here. Awesome write.
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Feb 17, 2005 22:03:34 GMT -5
Dark yet great
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