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Post by luscious on Jan 24, 2005 11:17:34 GMT -5
Resisting Predestination
Fate Pursued me with a vengeance I would not recognize its actuality I refused I rejected I denied
I was aware of Its task to subdue, control It haunted It stalked It bombarded
Destiny Interloper of my existence Governed my desperation For contentment and happiness I wrestled I struggled I fought
But it would not release me It was relentless Powerful Embracing Inevitable
Divinity Like a sinful retribution Through contrivance of my world Induced Failure Sadness
I, with predestination’s domination Embedded, inscribed within my soul Floundered Endured Submitted
And through acquiescent surrender Gained knowledge of Powerlessness Vulnerability Acceptance
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Seth
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Post by Seth on Jan 24, 2005 17:14:22 GMT -5
Intriguing write, love the style and the wording here. Creates some interesting imagery in my head.
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Feb 17, 2005 22:05:48 GMT -5
Yeah, this is awesome now, I love this one a lot
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