NeverMore
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Beethoven Looking f*g
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Post by NeverMore on Jan 24, 2005 4:18:02 GMT -5
as the door closes yet again time dims the smile that fills my space when reason once was
hiding here alone the dark hides the pain of mistakes that have been that can not be undone
knowing just how much was lost in the gap when failures brought words searing so free
the regret only matched by the stains on the floor no way to hide this feeling you see yet walk away
leaving behind in the wake only fear of never knowing never understanding
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Seth
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Root Beer Float
Play something country!
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Post by Seth on Jan 24, 2005 17:12:44 GMT -5
Your poems always create such bittersweet realism, entrancing the reader and showing us emotion- and this one as well, delivers that same feeling. Wonderful write.
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NeverMore
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Beethoven Looking f*g
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Post by NeverMore on Jan 30, 2005 2:25:39 GMT -5
I do thank you very much. It always means a great deal to me that people feel this way about some of my works. They are what move me and having it move others is something more special then is understood. Thank you again
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