Mirror

[NeverMore]

the man in the mirror
who he was was
staring back in
from a place he never knew
somewhere hidden in time
a love that never had reason

shame in the darkness
of love stolen secretly
where dreams unattended
wait silently for rescue
waits for the time
life sets them free

fog covers the glass
as the steam releases
visions yet unclear
of children yet unborn
lessons to remain untold
when the stars leave them lonely

time has left him standing
a place cold and forbidding
yet he remains staring in
looking to see who he finds
while in the dark and quiet
while in the dark and quiet

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This is very good, I enjoyed this

Kelz

[NeverMore]

Thank ya much

[Seth]

Breathtaking as I'm used to feeling over your poems. Lovely wording, the emotion beckons and grips the reader, filling the heart with such deep intrigue and raw yet poetic depth in felt emotion.
Awesome write as always.

[NeverMore]

I am always so pleased when I see comments like this one. It does seem though that my best works as others see them, are always the ones I find to be just blurted out.

"True poets do not write with a pen, They write with the ink that flows from thier hearts." I always hope that one day I feel I can live up to these words.

I thank you so much for your comments, no wonder I love this forum!