goodbye my friend

[Broken hope]

Can you see in my eyes i am lying?
Are my eyes still red from crying?

Last night was a night that broke me.
I lost my heart, but it made me see.

That in my years i have been naive.
I cut myself just to bleed.

The only way to know if i'm alive.
Without the pain i wouldn't survive.

Are my tears just a cry for help now?
Are you wanting to help but not knowing how?

This is just a waste of my time.
When someday i will die.

Tomorrow is grey and fake with a sun.
When tomorrow is jaded with a gun.

Well turn the walls red.
I'll be better off dead.

When no one and everyone want to yell.
They love me and they wish they could tell.

It's a what if again and this is the end.
Goodbye to you, goodbye to my friend.

[alostandbrokensoul]

This is really good i liked it alot the third stanza was my fav. Its good to read your writing again ive been going through a really suicidal time so i havent been on lately glad i got to start out by reading one of your amazing poems!!!!

[Seth]

I'm a huge fan of couplets,
though I really don't write them so much.
And I love reading your poems
not only for the couplets,
but for their truth and simplicity
yet deep emotional feel.
Awesome write, as always.