Joy to this f*cked up world

[Billy]

The world is a happy and beautiful place,
Joy to the world,
And all it's people,
Bull sh*t,
f*ck the world,
f*ck its people,
Like anyone gives a damn anyway,
Like anyone even cares,
No one thinks of me,
When I'm here,
Or there,
Well,
At least not positive thoughts,
I was thinking the other day,
On how deep I would have to go,
With the blade of a knife,
To reach my lives end,
To reach my goal in life,
Death,
I wonder if I used a dull knife,
If it would hurt more,
Because the pain is so good to me,
It's nice and calms me,
Tells me everything is going to be okay,
Thats what I want to be told,
When I take my last breath,
Thats what I want to hear,
WHen I take a hold on death,
But sometimes the pain is to plain,
And it feels the same,
As the pain,
That I feel,
When u tell me I'm not good enough,
When U tell me what u think is real,
Well what I think is real,
Is that ur a real b*tch,
A real whore,
and I think this urge to die is real,
So now I'm finnally pulling the cord.
~Billy~

Critisism please!!! Oh and make it constructive!!!
THNX!!!
Oh soem nice comments would be cool too....
~Billy~

[The Prince of Black Hearts]

I found this rather interesting, that's about all I know to say.

[Seth]

Wow, I'm totally at a loss for words.
I love the emotion that is so 'eloquently'
expressed here.
The beat and feeling of this,
sometimes lags or something,
but damn-
This is something a lot of
people can relate to.
Left me speechless and
in a total blank awe
--don't know if that makes any sense.
Nicely written, the 'pressure'
and emotion was felt.

[X x K e l Z x X]

Interesting indeed, I agree w/ John. Great write though.